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It sucks so bad DTA (didn't win~)

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WINNER: 12crueth.deviantart.com/art/Fi…

Took ages to upload so big

I failed the hair, I was in a bit of a rush. I was goiing to thicken it, and I forgot OTL
And also retried a style. Didn't turn out so good.

FOR DTA: fireflytwinkletoes.deviantart.…

Her name is Honey Glaze, Amber Royale, or Brandy! I CANNOT CHOOSE! <3

You can't see her cutie markk.... Depending on name:
Honey Glaze:
Bat wing covered with honey-y sheen. Talent is shiding, flying silently, creating shield.

Amber Royale:
She's a bit more stuck up here, and her cutie mark is amber, as in from a tree, and a few insects. She looks through amber to find old species, and she tries a hoof at creating it, too.

Brandy:
A bit of an innocent drunk. Cuite mark is a bottle of brandy and a few question marks in amber (as in the colour). Talent is BEING AN ADORABLE DRUNK
I dunt know.
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:star::star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty: Impact

Overall it was okay for being as rushed as it sounds like, but it does have some issues.

As you noted, the hair is too thin, and is transparent in way too many places.

Also at the front view this is made from, it looks like she only has one wing. It is plausible that her other wing is tucked in, but I dunno, it looks like she only has one wing to me.
The face expression looks kinda strange, like not that drunk looking to me, but it works.

I am surprised that you pulled off all of the shapes without using outlines, but instead by changing the colors slightly, that was kinda interesting. Although, personally I would have definitely used an outline for the snout.

Overall good use of colors to differentiate the parts without outlines.